According to Claudio and Don Pedro Benedick has shaven his
beard and “he looks younger than he did by the loss of a beard” and this shoes
how Benedick is trying to fit in to the ideal look of a pubescent boy, with at
that time was viewed as being attractive. His clothes have also changed they
describe him to be wearing “slops” and “no doublet”, they imply these are his
best clothes and he looks like a fool. By the way they treat him you can see
that he has changed from the bragging soldier to the person being mocked. He is
the type person of person that Benedick at the beginning of the play would have
mocked (much like he did with Claudio). He says that he has a “toothache” to
avoid admitting that he is in love.
Don John’s choice of language makes the impact of his
revelation more devastating because he appears to be courteous when he is
talking to them, like he is trying to get on their good side. He appears to be apologetic and deferential.
Don John is almost trying too hard to get them to listen and he is making them
seem more powerful even though it is his power and control of language that
influences the conversation. He apologised for talking about Hero as he appears
to believe that talking to her will bring shame, and by identifying this belief
their very conversation is bringing more shame to her name, this creates the
impression he is morally superior. He leaves them an out and doesn’t push too
hard with his revelation by trying to convince them.
This answer includes elements of A04 (the ideal of a pubescent male) and you demonstrate an awareness of the change in character.
ReplyDeleteHowever, once again, in order to develop the skills required for the higher grade boundaries you must include other AO's, deception is central to these events as is the connection to the book of the courtier. Transformation plays a key role in the play so try and examine that too.